Hello everyone,
Today I made a small websites about Orcas after seeing the documentary Blackfish.
Could you guys give me feedback on perhaps what i did wrong and what i did well?
Link: http://killerwhale.webflow.io/
Link: https://preview.webflow.com/preview/killerwhale?preview=10a41d981372b2f979cc9b8640789a99
Your feedback will be greatly appreciated!
Michael
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Ahmadz839
(Ahmad Zafar)
November 1, 2015, 5:18pm
2
Hey @DharmaNode
Great job but there are a few issues you can fix:
The section 2 text seems to be overflowing [Screenshot][1]
Add a bit more top and bottom padding to Section 4 [Screenshot][2]
After the section 4 video ends the background goes black [Screenshot][3]
Dont worry about the two navigations showing up in the screenshots its just the screenshot software that does that.
Best
Ahmad
[1]: http://nimb.ws/Hrw3WZ
[2]: http://nimb.ws/xegJp8
[3]: http://nimb.ws/m3kQzq
Thanks for the feedback!
I have fixed the section 4 thingy because right after i posted this topic dropbox sent me an email about too much traffic because of the video haha.
Is the navigation on the right double for you? I saw it in screenshot 4
I seem to have done something wrong since all those things you show me don’t happen on all of my 3 screens haha.
I will try to fix them, thanks again for the feedback!
Edit: It’s weird because in the editor everything is fine at the bottom:
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Ahmadz839
(Ahmad Zafar)
November 1, 2015, 5:27pm
4
Your welcome
No its not double its just a glitch in my screenshot software
Good luck on the fixes if you need any help just ask
Best
Ahmad
Ahmadz839
(Ahmad Zafar)
November 1, 2015, 5:33pm
5
Any chance i can have the read-only link? so i can help you
Edited the thread with the link
Ahmadz839
(Ahmad Zafar)
November 1, 2015, 5:46pm
7
Ok thanks looking into the issue
Going to have dinner will look into it after
Ahmadz839
(Ahmad Zafar)
November 1, 2015, 6:23pm
8
Hey @DharmaNode
Seems like you figured it out its now fixed all i would suggest it add 5% padding top and bottom to section 4 container
Best
Ahmad
Does anyone know how to prevent the gap between the html embed and the body?
seank
(Sean Watkins)
November 2, 2015, 7:12pm
11
How did you create the circles that highlight as your scroll down the page? - Great job btw.
Sean
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Great site! I love the usage of the video and flat design.
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PixelGeek
(Nelson)
November 2, 2015, 10:02pm
13
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL! Great job!
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