We’re almost ready to put the new site live. I thought I’d share a preview with you and see what feedback you might have before we do so… Specifically on the animated elements / footer!
There are a few minor bits to take care of, including the page descriptions for the individual products.
I like the fish design and also the animations and colour changes.
Possibly missing are images of the mysterious crisps themselves though?
Maybe also adding an image/visual next to the packets of some posh salt/vinegar (probably not a stock image from a ‘greasy spoon’ !) and a slice of lime/chilli etc.
Thank you Stum, I’m sure we’ll be adding some finer details on the next version of the website - for now, we just needed to get something up quickly on a small budget.
Can the copy be changed? Last part of the first sentence is not motivating me to try the product. Scrap it, use that area to tell me what’s great about the product, does it taste like chicken? Perhaps you can go to a three column single row layout for the flavors. For people new to the product put the options right up front. People who enjoy similar product will see your offer and prospects won’t be put off by having to read through the original flavor copy.
The copy can be changed - however that’s down to the client!
I suppose we can’t please everyone, and they don’t quite have the budget for a professional copywriter. It’s really just a starting point whilst they’re scaling production - they’re less concerned about making sales online than they are meeting the orders that they need to fulfil in the short term.
I will take these thoughts into consideration for the next iteration, however