Welcome to my portfolio site. Let me know what you think. All feedback welcome good or bad
www.jackgammondesigns.co.uk
Hi @jgammon
congrats on finishing your site and good luck with everything.
A few points:
- Buttons should go below the paragraph, thats where user expect it.
- Your “Get a quote” text clashes with your hero text on landscape view
- You could give your projects a background to appear as boxes.
- Give your images an overlay (dark, 30-50%opacity), so the “click to view” text is visible more clearly
- There is a typo at “a little bit about me”
- Your background is very dull … Jump in illustrator, make a few icons and spread them over your website, this is very nice technique to make it visually interesting with very little work.
Here are some examples: one two three four five << This will heavily improve your design within 10 minutes … - Once you have done that, set your background image to fixed, so it will look even cooler.
- You should give your navbar a background on scroll immediately … on mobile, the navbar text clashes with your content
- Your navbar needs more spacing at the bottom
- Give your buttons and overlays a hover treatment
- Never give a section more than one H1 … right now you have 4xH1 right at the beginning. Google will hate you.
- Limit your form width to about 400 - 600 px.
- The client text size is bigger than your section heading, this makes it look really weird.
- I know this is heavily opinion based … But please please please choose a better looking and more unique font that has some style to it. Yours are absolutely boring
I would love to see these suggestions implemented.
Please tag my name if you decided to do this and I will take another look and maybe even give a few more design tips.
Best,
Karl-Heinrich
Good start. However, it is not unique. I would strongly suggest to put your story up at the top. There are so many web designers out on the internet. What makes you different?
This video explains it more:
Hope this helps