Feedback Please!

I have spent a while designing this page:

I would really appreciate any feedback you have—both positive and constructive!

I would like to know:

  • Do you feel you got enough information from it?
  • Does the design flow?
  • Was it persuasive?
  • Does it make you want to enquire?
  • If you were in the market for a VoIP system, would this make you interested in our product?

The page is designed to get our business leads, so any feedback is greatly appreciated.