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Hey guys! Hope everyone is well. I know this is a big ask but wondered if anyone could take a quick look at a landing page I’ve been ‘attempting’ to put together. It’s in the hope of trying to win work for a local restaurant and improve upon their current website. I thought I’d design a landing page since my portfolio is just starting. A little apprehensive to send across my proposal as it’s my first attempt to win work.

Any guidance, experience, tips on where I may have gone wrong or could improve upon, would be immensely appreciated. I know I need to sharpen my skills with design responsiveness, and how sections flow/merge into one another (among many other design aspects).

In the proposal, I have outlined ideas for a fully interactive menu, and online booking system I feel would help improve upon the original website and benefit their business.

Their original website(not the worst):

Thanks so much in advance.

Here is my site Read-Only: LINK
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